The original chapter splits between the ESS and Clear Skies was well done. The pacing felt slow in some parts, but it picked up appropriately before getting anywhere near the cliff of disinterest. In a piece THIS large, that's a testament to the work. There were only a few little formatting and grammatical errors. This is heavy investment of time to read, but it's worth it to me. I can't speak for others if they will like or dislike it. Little snips of dialogue of that type could help, but this is just a personal suggestion. There are some openings for a few comedic elements to help the heavy feel of this piece. I like your OC's Autumn and Dew thus far, and the little snips at the beginning of each chapter add a nice feel. The characters don't have as much "depth" as some other fic-novels I've read, but that ISN'T the purpose of this story. A few of the characters were in danger of becoming cliche, but the idea of a conspiracy unraveling in later chapters saves Golden Lock from arrogant ass boss archetype. Good action, almost a pop-corn flick type of feel. You managed to kill what I had planned today. Highly Recommended.I needed to stop at the end of Ch. It may not live up to the incredible standards of the Pixar brand, but Brave offers young audiences a lot of entertainment and adventure.
The film lacks the trademark Pixar wit we've come to expect from the animation studio's productions, and some humor feels shoe-horned in for the sake of having some laughs the directorial kerfuffle that took place in the middle of production is not overwhelmingly obvious, but there is a distinct laugh of singular vision driving the film and its tone wavers throughout.
Brave is at its best when it's smartly and charmingly changing what we think think a Disney Princess can be, but it wavers when it tries to somehow reinvent the Pixar wheel. The visual effects are flawless, in my opinion, the best if all Pixar films. Brave is a beautiful and moving new fairy tale that fits seamlessly into the genre Princess Merida is a wonderfully multi-facted heroine the film shapes itself around problems that are familiar and understandable and will be well-understood and appreciated by kiddos and parents alike the supporting characters that are given the most attention are well-crafted (but too bad for those others that fall by the wayside).
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